I would really love some critizisim on this piece. I've been working really hard on it but I still feel like it's lacking. When I look at it I'm not impressed.

I want this to have a lot of umph because it's going to be the only finished landscape in my portfolio.

Photoshop cs2


Big Wig, Hazel, and the spirit of El-ahrairah in the sky looking down on them.

The characters are from the novel Watership Down by Richard Adams, one of my all time favorites. Everyone should read it! : D


EDIT: H okay. Thanks everyone so so so much for all the advice and crits! : _ : Your always there for me.

I've tried to make all the suggested changes, and I added some yellow to the sky and worked into the clouds to make them look wispier (Is that a word? Who knows)

If you can think of anything else keep them coming! * w *

Edit Edit: Hard light on rabbits, swirly sky, and Kehaar is in the middle of the sky now (Bridging device?)