I would really love some critizisim on this piece. I've been working really hard on it but I still feel like it's lacking. When I look at it I'm not impressed.
I want this to have a lot of umph because it's going to be the only finished landscape in my portfolio.
Photoshop cs2
Big Wig, Hazel, and the spirit of El-ahrairah in the sky looking down on them.
The characters are from the novel Watership Down by Richard Adams, one of my all time favorites. Everyone should read it! : D
EDIT: H okay. Thanks everyone so so so much for all the advice and crits! : _ : Your always there for me.
I've tried to make all the suggested changes, and I added some yellow to the sky and worked into the clouds to make them look wispier (Is that a word? Who knows)
If you can think of anything else keep them coming! * w *
Edit Edit: Hard light on rabbits, swirly sky, and Kehaar is in the middle of the sky now (Bridging device?)
Hmmm... if you want critizism... maybe the rabbit looks a bit strange, and you should care A BIT more about the shadows, but I LOVE this drawing. Is sweetie sweet >w<
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It's really beautiful, very watership down. Kris loves it too.
My advice: Bigger? And work on the tree more, it looks good, but it just kind of lacks something the rest of the picture.
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Bleh
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Also, where have you disappeared to?
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Te quierro putaaaaa!!!
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What the heck can you even say in these things?
Alright, it's bigger, but I accidentally only saved the jpeg so it's still kind of small - _ -
Thanks Becky
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What the heck can you even say in these things?
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What the heck can you even say in these things?
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