Epic revamp

This is a revamp of my old deviation "Epic Failure" (Named after the person who commissioned it, not after my opinion of it)

I'm trying my hand at bgs <.<

Thank you to [link]
This is such a good tutorial! I love it!

Feedback loved please.

Edit: Submitting a print was an accident, and I don't know how to take it off... If you actually do want a print, talk to me because I can make high quality prints myself and sent them to you for less. (My dad manages a digital print office, I'm very lucky that way)